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for The Seduction of Seth

by Kawanee

person Shangyu
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YEEP! Okay... well, maybe now Seth is going to admit that he's not totally straight. Mah... can't wait for the next chapter. This one seemed a little rushed,... but whatever... it was to build up for the next one I see ^^

update soon!
person Kiyokun
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! That pretty much sums it up in a nut shell ^_^
person wicca pet
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
are you going to write more i hope so it is geting good you are a good writer
person Yuffie_03
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay an update. Please update some more cuz I want to seee Seth get into some more trouble. *grins*
person altoforensics
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love the story, especially how it's written. you didn't jump immediately to sex, which would be completely unrealistic. you have awesome writing skills! can't wait to see how this turns out. will Clarissa find out? why wasn't she home? when will he finally admit he wants some sweet male loving (sorry *shrugs*, had to)? keep it coming!
person riddlestar
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
'course i like this title better.. the last one was a bit...crude. hehe.. neway poor jacob really is a patient guy..! and Seth sure is confused..! LOVE IT. update sooner~
ciao!
person LamaPie
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it!!1 please please please write more soon... if u do i'll give u cookies *shows coockies* u know u want them!!
person Yusta
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was good, defintly more hehe. Im still on my seat trying to figure out where this story is going to go. But please continue this is so good. And I hope Seth soon realizes what hes losing and losing out on ^^. Update soon. <3
person Leanne
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ARGH!
Ive only just found this story. Ive read up to chapter 13 and now i need more!
Please!
Take pity on me!

Im desperate to know what happens next....

I like the fact that youre stringing out the 'im straight' thing...makes the story more believable.
Great work!
person Yuffie_03
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You have a very good story going and I can't wait to see what happens next.