rate_review Reviews

I was really excited when I saw this had been updated. :D

After having slept on it and had the better part of a day to think about the story... it's still way awesome. There are a couple of words I saw that weren't right. One of those, close, but the spellchecker probably fixed them wrong sort of things. I don't remember where now, but I can go back and find them if you'd like. Also, I love Milo. His internal monologue is awesome and totally relateable (I don't think that's a word). Also, funny as hell, which is really good. In a story with a lot of angst, it's always good to have something to laugh at so it doesn't get too heavy.

Having said that... Luke seems a little bit too together now. He's been through all this shit, but he seems totally fine now, which seems shockingly unrealistic when you look at how awesomely realistic everything else has been.

I can really tell you researched your stuff. None of it seems Hollywood or faked. You really seem to know what you're talking about and how these things work. Which is... awesome. Man, I need more words. My vocabulary clearly sucks.

Anyway, you're still doing a great job. I can't wait to read more.

Shortness usually bothers me, but I dont care how much of the shortest chapter that was, I LOVED IT!! Damn, Milo has some set of BALLS lol! *applause* If that dosent scream honesty and commitement I dont know what will. He's definately forgiven by me lol! Great chapter, update soon please!!!!

Well it might have been short but it was worth the wait. I loved it. I'm glad Milo made things right before Luke got hurt. Can't wait to see what more you have in store.

OH MY GOD! THAT WAS THE BEST CHAPTER EVER (chapter 29)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 I LOVE IT!!!!! AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!!

ASOTA

wow, this story is good! i love the way you describe all of your character! but it also makes me so angry at the real world, it totally S*cks that people are so g*d dammit homophobic all the time!

I've been following your story for a long time and I love it.
Think you do a wonderful job, describing their emotions and their difficult situation, and you didn't fall for the easy way out: to get them into bed as soon as possible.
This is credible and under-the-skin and really, really good!

He still hasn't redeemed himself yet. He is going to have to pull out the big guns. And no worries about the story ending. Every story should have a beginning and an end. It's fun getting to the end cause then you have closure none of the frustration of only getting to the end of the chapter and then having to wait.

Agh! Usually I can handle cliff hangers. Actually, I'm a fan of them... makes me all merrily excited for the next chapter to come out. But this... I just cannot take. I can't! I need closure! I need Milo to go apologize for being a dickhead. Like. Right. Now.
No pressure though, lol. :D
Awesome, awesome chapter. I'll be sad to see it end, but it's such a great story that I can't wait to see how it ends either. Keep it up!

i hope that everything gets better, and hopefully, milo will be at ease enough to stay with luke in front of his peers.
ASOTA

Awww, poor Milo (that big ass! lol, jk). Wonder what the news is, hmmmmm...lol. Hope its not to bad. Great chapter, update soon please!!!