rate_review Reviews

okay - i felt it that time. it feels like the end - but can they come back from time to time with just sweetness and light? they've been through so much, i'd like these two to be happy - just have fun goofy moments that show how much they love each other. great job regardless. Love this story. -L

Ch 32:
Amazing...as always. You are one of my favorite writers on here. It was so sweet. :) I hope you feel inspired enough to write the epilogue.
Congratulations,
DS

thanx for writing this <3

i don't review often, but i figured you deserved one. i loved this story so much and i'm sad to see it end, but at least it's a happy ending. i would like an epilogue if you choose to write one. and luke kissing milo in front of his dad made me smile. going to see the execution like that was a good idea. it seemed to give a sense of closure to the story. i like your style so i hope you start a new story soon. thanks for a good read. ;)

i LOVE chapter 32!!! in my opinion, it was one of the best chapters in the story! please keep up the good work!! i can't wait to see how everything turns out!
ASOTA

Woot! I got all excited when you mentioned me in the author's notes. XD
I've been reading your other stories, so I know that you know grammar. One of the things I love about your writing style is how distinctive your characters are. There's no way I could ever confuse any of them with each other. I'm notoriously bad at mixing up storylines and stuff when I'm reading multiple things, but I haven't had a problem at all keeping your stuff straight. Milo does not sound like Benji and that's great. It's really hard to write in first person and make it different every time.

In other news, I didn't see any glaring errors in the chapter. Except that my name doesn't have an E in it. :P

And... ZOMG! It feels like the story's coming to an end. I'm sad because I love the characters so much. I don't want it to be over. But you've done such a wonderful job, I'm sure you'll pull it off. This is really just amazing. Seriously. I haven't enjoyed reading much lately, but your stories are just... wow. I would pay to read them.

Wow! Thanks for the update!! I loved it! *hugs*
They shouldn't be too ashamed to want that man dead after what he did! ><
Man, I'm glad they're working things out! They really do make a cute couple! *hugs them* ^^

Thanks again! I can't wait for more!

i just basically read this in one sitting
its very well done
i love that you dont gloss over the sad and unpretty parts because they make people uncomfortable. it gives the story realism. verisimilitude, thats the word right?
its very heart wrenching and im really attached to the characters. i cant wait to read more

So I read that one review complaining about the grammar and honestly? The story would be completely boring if it had been written by the book. If Milo hadn't acted and thought like a high school boy, I wouldn't have continued reading. Because really, who wants to read a story about two perfect, inhuman characters (since no human thinks in completely proper English, unless English is their second language -- in which case they probably wouldn't be thinking in English anyway?) unless they're MEANT to be inhuman. Your style makes the story REAL and that's what it's supposed to feel like when you read a book.

I also think you're completely entitled to any whiny author's note that you want to put at the end of a chapter. It's your story and no one HAS to read it, so there really should be no complaints. Your not going through all this work just for the reader, you're working on your own masterpiece as well. Do whatever the FUCK you want as long as it doesn't interfere with the core of "Doorways and Windows". I really enjoy this, so thank you for your continuous updates.

P.S. especially since all your "complaining" author's notes aren't really complaints at all?