rate_review Reviews

s'y haven't reviewed in a while but i had to say that is write how beautiful this epilogue was.
realy beautiful.

The End

Thanks for a story that had me in tears just
when I really needed a good cry!! If it wasn't followed
up with complete joy I'm not sure if I'd of recovered!!
(Okay, I'm being overdramatic here!)

Thanks for your wonderful story! Love the great study habits
of Luke's, excellent! I see now why he is an "A" student!!

Hope the best for Milo and Luke and their author!!

R

yay! happy ending!!!
ASOTA

Nice with that bit of closure. In my crass moments I go, right, two 16 y-o's settling down for life... How many couples find each other at that age? But hey, it's fiction and we don't have to be crass. They will live happily ever after, and grow but together.

First off, I love this story. It is amazingly well done, amazingly told and Milo has one of the most realistic voices I have ever read. It's simply a well done story.

This may sound really weird, but there is a song that comes on the radio every once and a while. It's called Stop and Stare or something. And whenever I hear the song, I think of this story. I'm not sure why, but I just do. So when I hear it on the radio when I am driving home from work or something, I smile and remind myself to check AFF.net to see whether or not this has been updated. And now when I hear it, I worry that I might feel a little sad that I won't be able to see anymore updates. Hopefully I'll still smile because I'll still think of Milo and Luke. You're not the only one who is sad to see these characters go.

Kudos on a job well done. (And if there is a light fluffy epilogue, I will be eager to read it).

Thanks for a great story! I found that last scene creepy - kissing at an execution. But I'm against death penalty and wouldn't have wanted them to even be there for it. Anyways, it's been a pleasure to read all this angst and h/c, and I hope we'll get that epilogue, it would feel good I think.

You finished it!! Not that I had an doubts you would, and if you're looking for votes, one more little chapter would be awesome. If I have any conscrit at all, it would be that this end chapter was longer. It is hard to let characters go. For the writer and for the readers caught up in the story. I mean, I am glad for this ending being what it is, but now... ::sigh:: well, you do have other stories I haven't read yet. I think I'll click that interesting title one, so I don't miss this one so much.
That you can put so much of yourself into a story is what makes you such a great writer. Thanks for this story. I will always remember it.

Awwwwwww That was a sweet end!! Even tho I'm said that this is the end, I'm still so darn Happy that everything went ok for them after everything they went through! ^__^
I just knew they would make it! haha *hugs them* LOL I so love those two so much! :P

I don't really want to let go of them either, but that's not really my choice! ;; But I still want to thank you for the great story!! I REALLY enjoyed it!! *hugsX3* I look forward for an epilogue tho! hihi n___n

Thanks again! XD

Wow that was powerful and deep. I loved the ending, not because Luke's father was executed, but because Luke was able give a big f*ck you to his dad in the end. A f*ck you by being happy when his dad tried to suppress him so much. The kiss didn't hurt! I've really enjoyed reading this story and getting to know these characters. I feel the ending was perfect I wouldn't change a thing. Maybe you can do your fluff love scene as a one shot update or something, Like them a year later. I hate to tell you how to write your story, but that last chapter just ended the story perfectly. I would hate for you to change it.

That was just... wow. Motherfucking amazing. <3