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for Doorways and Windows

by orbitingjupiter

schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I haven't been around much, so... I just read the last three chapters. And wow. Fantastic way to end it. o_o The lethal injection bit was unexpected but oddly hardcore. And I loved the happy ending. I'm totally a sucker for happy endings. ^^ I don't particularly have much to say (it's late, but I don't wanna put off reviewing until the morning 'cause if I do I won't remember to come back and review) except that it was a wonderful story from the beginning all the way through, and I'm very, very glad I gave it a whirl! Great perspective, lovable characters, the whole works. Thanks for sharing it.
person Kryst Sutures
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like how you cheated me out of a sex scene until the very end ;]. I loved this story, though. The characters, the plot... Everything. It was amazing. I can't wait to see more works from you.
person Shanna
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent, I would read any story you write, and I wi;; be check weekly to see when you write something new. I don't want you to slip from my radar.
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay to both of them for making it work. Bravo! And I love that final line, it was beautiful! I'm going to miss these guys!
person jaded
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwwws. I love the ending :)
person roolez
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say thank you for such a beautifully written story. I first saw it this afternoon and thought "this looks interesting" and decided to check it out. Hours later (with short breaks in between to feed the crew, and run a couple of errands) I found myself having read all 33 chapters. I'm completely blown away by your writing skills. You captured my interest from word one and never lost it. Your characters are so completely life-like. It's been a long time since I've read a book/post that had me wondering about the characters as I was trying to get other things done, hurrying to get back to the computer to read more of what you'd written. I absolutely loved the way you took us on a journey of ups and downs, heartaches and happiness and still left us wanting more. The ending was beautiful....perfect. I feel like I'm repeating myself and just cannot find the right words to let you know how this story touched my heart. Thank you so much for one of the most enjoyable days off I've had in forever. I will definitely look for more of your work. Your talent is extraordinary. Please keep writing.

roolez
person Infek
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad that everything ended on a happy note for those two because hell, they deserve it.
I really enjoyed reading your story! Thank you for completing this.
person vividwhite
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for adding one more glimpse into the lives of Milo and Luke. Perfect wouldn't be insulting, would it? Great story, great writing. ::sadly leaves::

person Koira
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The last sentence was... wow.
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*happy spazz moment* Eek, I loved it. <33