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i liked it!!!!
please update again soon yeah?

Plx update ur story soon. I like it. keep up the good work ^^

Huh? He doesn't remember? Well, he did say he reacts rather strongly to aspirin, but still ... or is it this sleep-walk stuff? I'm really more than curious now about what is going on inside of Luke's head. And why he can't remember. And if he's always like this; if he's kind of masochist too when he's not high on aspirin. And if he will remember one day. Or repeat what he did. And, basically, what will happen next. In other words: I want an update, pretty fast. ^-^

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YAY, new chapter. oooh and he doesn't remembr anything. This kid is cuhrazy, but that's what's so attractive about him. I love this STORY

Is something wrong with your computer, is that why you have forsaken us? Please update soon. PLEASE!!!

wow, what a messed up kid...guess having a serial killer dad will do that to you. Makes me wonder how much he knew and also what his father did to him.

You're writing is amusing, which keeps the angst at bay, keeps it lighter than it would be if you didn't, keeps it from being too dark. It's actually fun to read the way you wrote it, very intersting and I like it alot.

I really love Milo and you did really good explaining his thoughts.

Well, okay, I'm glad to find another story to add to my growing collection. I'm totally engrossed in this now and will be waiting for more chapters.

This is Shanna, a faithful reviewer. And Let me say I will be faithfully reviewing this one. I read the reviews, and don't find it cliche or generic at all. When I read the summary I was intrigued, but I thought to myself how will this work. . . I would be so angry , I could never fall for my father's killer son. BUT, somehow you made it believable. You made me believe that somehow they can fall in love. And you did it is only 2 chapters. I seriously can't wait until you really get the story going. I will check it EVERYDAY, and Hold my breathe while the page loads, then I will do the silly little dance whenever there is an update. It worked for A Stage and a Bus. (Oh by the way why did you change that to the Slash Category, this story I understand, but not that one.) PLEEEAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEE Update soon. this is me begging.

I was expecting something along those lines though not quite so quick. But instead of it feeling rushed it just feels incredibly intense.
Please write more, I really want to know where this is going.

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i love it.
continue this or else
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