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for Doorways and Windows

by orbitingjupiter

person jayree05
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I always love your stories... you make the characters seem so real and believable. This one is no exception. Just wanted you to know that I'm reading this one. Can't wait to see what happens next.
person Mayo
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you soo much!
I've been waiting for so long.
;o; The new chapter[s] are wonderful!
Good job, I want to read more, please!
:)
person Stacy
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you write such short chapters!! they are excellent don't get me wrong but it's like giving a child a sucker, let him have a few licks then taking it away. that's so mean!! honesty though, you have one awesome fic going and i just need more then a couple of licks that's all. **giggle**
i really do think i'm funny.
seriously your a kick butt author and i can't wait for your next update!
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for writing this story. I really like the storyline, you're going places with this. I usually dont leave much feedback but this was very interesting and i had to send you something to maybe persuade you into writing more. I read all six chapters in all of thirty minutes. I loved it and i cannot get enough of it.
person Sekre
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay update .. I have no clue what's wrong with him but I hope things will be okay.
person Civako
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think this is a very original story and I like it very much. Thanx!
person ravenight
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad that you've decided to continue this story. I've been into it since you first started it, and it's like one of 3 stories on this section that I actively watch for updates for. lol please continue it, i'm really into the characters
person mayo
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad to see something like this on aff! Lately, there's been these boring stories that don't make sense or don't go anywhere at all. I'm trusting you to keep me enlightened! I saw that your previous stories were completed as well, so... I hope you finish this one, too! I love Milo. He's soo indescribably cute and is taking things well for someone who's father was just murdered. Luke scares me. :O
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehehe, I love the story and I especially love Luke, he's a little creepy but I still love his chr. ^_^ Keep up the good work and keep writing. I hope Luke is ok. ^_^


-Shion
person youssii_amala_kasai
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yaaay! carry on plz!!!!!!