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for Doorways and Windows

by orbitingjupiter

person Gillery
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, bollocks.. i got so into this and it's not finished. well keep it up, lovie.
person Kat
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the story. It's sad that this had to happen to the boys but with his horrific incident, they found each other. I hope that Luke will get better. These two were meant for each other.
person Saminada
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Already the end of this chapter???
Noooooooooooo!! >____< I want more!!!
I hope they'll support each other to the end!!
... but I have to say that I have a felling that Luce's hiding something!
I wonder if I'm right? Does that women suspect something too??

Anyways! I hope u'll update again soon so I can find out! ^^
person Saminada
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter!!! It was good!!
I loved it! I hope the boys will get the help they need 'cause what happened to them is just too sad! T__T

Anyways! I can't wait for more! Plz update again soon!
person AtheneNoctua
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Such a sad and such a beautiful story... Thank you very much for it, please, keep writing so I can keep reading this!
person weide
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't like it when authors give feedback to comments in the story. Perhaps you can create an extra "story" where you answer to comments. Some people might want feedback without giving out their email addresses or creating an account and it might be easier for you. Or it's all bullshit:)

I don't mind your short chapters (of course I would prefer daily novel-like updates ;p) but whatever suits you best. You're the artist you decide. I'm happy for every update regardless how short or sparse.

To the story: I read that feedback about your style being crude. I don't really know what crude means exactly, but your style appears a bit less, I don't know, polished? than in blood oranges, but I only noticed that in the first chapter and it's not really bad. It doesn't disturb the flow of the story. I think you are one of the best authors here.
person Aleks
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very original story!
Looking forward for them going to a shrimp...
person Saminada
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! *sniff sniff* ;;
This story is so sadddd!!!! T_____T

I really hope they'll go to that program together and that they'll be able to get better in the end!
I'm glad to finally read a story that the abuser (or whatever) chooses to go for help or like in this case, doesn't REFUSED when the help is offered, instead of always saying "I'm sooooo sorry and I won't do it again!!" and shit like that!!! >_< 'cause we all know that it's never the truth! *sighs*
I truly admire ur boys 'cause at least THEY realize that they need help! *pats their heads* lol
They are just poor boys after all! It's not really their faults that they're about to crack or go crazy! ...anyone would after what happened to them! T__T *hugs them*

But anyways, I love to read this kinda story!
I really liked this! Thanks alot! *hugs*
I can't wait for more! I want to see how the boys gets along after all!

And btw, I'm ready to bet anything in this world that his (don't remember his name >>) father beet him up and that he's also the one that gave him that head injury! right? Grrr I HATE that asshole!!! He destroyed his own family!

Anyways, u can email me if u want! ^^
And I don't really care if you reply to us in ur updates or not 'cause as long as you update (even if it's short) I'll be OK with that!! n_______n

...man, I think this is the longest review I'm ever written! >__<
person Shanna
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please as always keep up the great work, and now that know you are working on this one I will check for update often.
person Shanna
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay I'm so happy to see your are working on this story again. I love the way your mind works and the way you create these characters that I start to care about and fall in love with. I like theis story because it just so NOT TYPICIAL.