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September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a unique storyline. I would really love to see what happened to them in the future.
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May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just really loved this story. I suppose the story line of the bully falling in love guy he beats up theme has been done plenty of time, but the whole serial killer father bit is a neat twist. And its pulled of really smoothly, like the plot could be totally cheesy and over dramatic, but its not. The characters behaviors seem really plausible and its easy to really understand the characters and make sense of what they do. Just great.
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April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well, i wondered if you had any other storys than 'its like this' and i sstarted looking around and got hooked on this one.
i can't really tell yet which part of your writing it is that fascinates me so much- but it does.
not very constructive, i fear, huh?
i loved the story!! though it gave me some sleepless hours of wondering and i am so glad they made it and will be happy ever after..
(i'm addicted to fluffy endings so thank you especially for the epilogue!)
thanks!
cheers, rain^^
i can't really tell yet which part of your writing it is that fascinates me so much- but it does.
not very constructive, i fear, huh?
i loved the story!! though it gave me some sleepless hours of wondering and i am so glad they made it and will be happy ever after..
(i'm addicted to fluffy endings so thank you especially for the epilogue!)
thanks!
cheers, rain^^
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March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
... k. This was fucking emotional and wonderful and touching and fuckawesome and sad and amazing and hot and i just fucking adore Milo and Luke. every single fucking little thing about them-- i love. this one is definitely one of my favs.
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August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man, you're determined to make me cry with your stories, aren't you? This was wonderful. You tackled an emotional situation that's really, really complex, and you handled it deftly and honestly. There were a couple of little spots where I got tripped up by something that didn't seem to make sense... not sure if it was a consistency issue or I'm just dense and missing something. But that was minor.
Mostly, it was beautiful. Your writing has a very unique perspective, and your stories really stand out among everything else I've read.
Mostly, it was beautiful. Your writing has a very unique perspective, and your stories really stand out among everything else I've read.
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August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my goodness. I lol'd hard.
Reading this story in one sitting and loving it. XD
Reading this story in one sitting and loving it. XD
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July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story...IT was so good.
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June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wait...when did you update this story? I mean really, where was I? Probably hiding under a rock somewhere lol. I was thinking, why havent you updated in a while and I look up the story and see this, bam! The story's finished (yes, Im rambling, my deepest apologies). Anyway, THAT WAS AWESOME!! I love this story, it was sooooo good, ad I havent even read the epilogue yet! Off to read it I go!
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June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now Im finished! *cries* That was so sweet, but so sad at the same time knowing its the end. At least they'er finally happy now. Great story!!!
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April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
!!!!!!!!
OMG!!!!
i'm so sad and depressed at the moment!! its because your story is AMAZING and its over! =[ I read it just then and I LOVE the GENIUS that comes out of your head!!! YOUR STORY'S SO ADORABLE! While reading it I had to often stop and compose myself! lol
i hope you keep on writing little gems like this one. :D it wouldn't make sense to make a sequel so i'll just settle with reading it over and over again. :)
All i can say is thank you for writing this!
OMG!!!!
i'm so sad and depressed at the moment!! its because your story is AMAZING and its over! =[ I read it just then and I LOVE the GENIUS that comes out of your head!!! YOUR STORY'S SO ADORABLE! While reading it I had to often stop and compose myself! lol
i hope you keep on writing little gems like this one. :D it wouldn't make sense to make a sequel so i'll just settle with reading it over and over again. :)
All i can say is thank you for writing this!