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November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I...want...more...
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November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 19
Very sweet and real!!!
Love how you've captured the on running dialog
that goes on so fast inside everybodies head.
Terrific!! These vunerable youths have captured
each other and it makes every chapter a sweet read!!!
Thanks,
R
Very sweet and real!!!
Love how you've captured the on running dialog
that goes on so fast inside everybodies head.
Terrific!! These vunerable youths have captured
each other and it makes every chapter a sweet read!!!
Thanks,
R
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November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, yay, yay, just finished marathon-reading everything you've written. I is in love. Yes.
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November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. I wasn't even done with this first chapter and already loved it. I love the writing style and how it flows so well. I love how the main character has humor when telling the story and thinking about things. Well done!!
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November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I google image searched the car. HAD to....sweet vehicle there.
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November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was the best way to describe a kiss ever! You win a prize for that, that and what Milo said would happen to Luke. Omg that was hilarious, sweet signature and happy drugs. You are amazing.
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November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* They are just so adorable. I'm not usually one to read things that aren't loaded with smut so... this must obviously be worthy of a Nobel Peace Prize =O
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November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wasn't gooing to read this but there was nothing else to read so I gave it a whirl. I mean I have loved your other stories but this didn't sound like my kind of thing. I am pleased to say, I was pleasantly suprised. I loved how you dealt with the grief of the characters and the understandable anger and self-hate. I even got the impression that in a way they were both feeling lost and bewildered by events. I was a little miffed that you had to put Luke through the wringer but I think it's best not to rush the sex because there is so much going on it wouldn't be natural. Oh and don't take anymore vivid advice, she likes to torture her characters! LOL!
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November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay, im still in love with your story. i can't help it. it's too freakin' awesome. update sooner? lol.
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November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God. That...just works really well into the story, the reason as to why his father killed. I would never have thought of that ever. Kudos.