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Another wonderful chapter (or two)! The poor boys, being split up like that. Maybe I missed it in the earlier chapters but I didn't think Luke was that young. Oh well. As much as I feel so bad for them, I'm glad you had the social worker come in... makes the story more realistic because when, in the real world, would two teenage boys just be left alone to fend for themselves like that? The state always gets involved.

Can't wait for the next chapter!!

geesh... how'd I miss a chapter? You sneak two in at once? DRUNK scene. First, I was trying to remember all the ways you described things that made me think- 'that's really good' - but I gave up since there were just too many and now I'm writing about it in one long runon sentence because you made drunk seem so drunk that I think I got that way by osmosis or something.

Then I was VERY glad I missed a chapter because the end of that one was... nerve raking. I kept wondering what kind of power Miranda had, and got worried. So I skipped up to chapter twenty-one...

...and panicked. But then, Miranda let Luke stay, and even if he has a home somewhere else they can still see each other, which is okay. Milo won't let anyone abuse him or anything.You mentioned angst at the end, and it crossed my mind that you do angst perfectly. This whole story is angst, yet you don't make it blatantly obviously, don't use the words most of us do to describe it. You're brilliant, you're story is great and I'm saving it, which I do for very few I've read.

Thanks.

that was so sad! i think my heart broke a little. this story is really growing on me. update as soon as you can!

nooooo omg what a cliffy
nooo you can't take luke away he means everything to milo
and and and and they need eachother to stay fucking SANE
I await your next update
not very patiently lol

OH this is is so said, yet so good. I'm so happy for winter break. I hope you semester went well, and your break is even better!

First: OMFG Seriously, I don't know what else to say. I seriously love this story, and I seriously can't wait for more. Seriously.

Also, I live in Delaware. I don't know if you do, too, or if you made the setting Delaware because it's in the middle of no where, but honest to god, the population is basically made up of faggots and homophobes. How utterly convenient. To be honest, Rehoboth (our major beach) is probably the biggest gay hot spot between Delaware, Maryland, and New Jersey. Every bar is basically a gay bar. And a good handful of my graduating class was either gay or bisexual. That still doesn't mean you'll see gay people holding hands. Girls, maybe. But not guys. There were a few times where I've actually seen two guys walking side by side, looking as if they want to hold hands, but it's obvious that just one dirty look, or one sneering "faggots" is stopping them.

Aw man. I almost cried... Why must things go so wrong... *listens to Anna Molly by Incubus to calm down*

This story is so freaking adorable 0-0 I mean that in a good way....Milo and Luke are just so cute together. I don't know why it took me so long to read this story, considering how much I adore the others. Can't wait for the next chapter ^-^)o

Whooa. I just read everything in one go. *feels dizzy*
Anyways, it's good. It's weird. Could be weirder too...
For some reason, I keep expecting some sadomasochistic fucking between those two adorable lovebirds, seeing as Luke was so sexually masochistic (but in a yummy way) in the earlier chapters.
And I can't wait to see if Luke tells his father about Milo or not. :3

awwww!