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December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I have any new gushing to do that I haven't already done, but damn I love this story. =3 Hot chapter, though the direction of the story's kinda sad at the moment. Love how their reactions to that bit of news were so different. ^^
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December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was good and very sweet in a porny kinda way. and don't worry about the going to hell thing. i'll probably meet you there.
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December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch 23:
I don't think you can write a bad story! Blood Oranges was awesome and I'm reading A Stage and a Bus. This story is just so sweet. Milo and Luke are adorable, this chapter was especially good. :P I'm really sad that Luke is being taken away though. :( Can't wait to see where you take the story!
-DS
I don't think you can write a bad story! Blood Oranges was awesome and I'm reading A Stage and a Bus. This story is just so sweet. Milo and Luke are adorable, this chapter was especially good. :P I'm really sad that Luke is being taken away though. :( Can't wait to see where you take the story!
-DS
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December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn...wow. Just...wow...
Love the plot. Love the angst. Love the cute 'first-love-virgins' thing. Love the dialogue. Love the realism. Love...everything, really.
Wow.
I'll get back later, when my brain recovers from the short-circuit it received.
Love the plot. Love the angst. Love the cute 'first-love-virgins' thing. Love the dialogue. Love the realism. Love...everything, really.
Wow.
I'll get back later, when my brain recovers from the short-circuit it received.
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December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! Your really good at description, I could visualize the whole thing in my head *blushes*. Keep it up, your amazing! Great chapter, update soon please!!!
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December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Two more chapters again?? Yah for Christmas break! The way you update... I'm in awe of you. Not only that, but you should write - "A manuel on sex descriptions in modern prose" - or something along those lines. Yeah. That first time. Unemotional but all encompassing emotional. I also want to congradulate you in remaining in character for all these chapters.
Milo's seeing Luke's 'bravery' was good...he's always been brave, right from the start, going to personally ask forgiveness, despite not appearing brave doing it. People with inner strength vrs with outer. I hope the foster home is a good one... I hate to see Luke lose what he's gained.
Thanks again for another good read, and for this excellent story!!!
Milo's seeing Luke's 'bravery' was good...he's always been brave, right from the start, going to personally ask forgiveness, despite not appearing brave doing it. People with inner strength vrs with outer. I hope the foster home is a good one... I hate to see Luke lose what he's gained.
Thanks again for another good read, and for this excellent story!!!
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December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 23
Thank you for posting two chapters, jupiter :)
I absolutely loved them. The first time scene between Luke and Milo is one of the best I've read in some time. Very nicely done. And what about Miranda? It was nice of her to let them to have this last night. Whatever is going to happen to Luke now? He seems to be a voice of reason so far. It seems that Milo needs him even more than Luke needs him. If Milo goes to school now, then his grades would be really bad, since he missed so much.
Thank you for posting two chapters, jupiter :)
I absolutely loved them. The first time scene between Luke and Milo is one of the best I've read in some time. Very nicely done. And what about Miranda? It was nice of her to let them to have this last night. Whatever is going to happen to Luke now? He seems to be a voice of reason so far. It seems that Milo needs him even more than Luke needs him. If Milo goes to school now, then his grades would be really bad, since he missed so much.
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow Im just looking at this section and BAM! your story's here, which is good. But its weird (and also good) that I find like three new updates, and Im wondering when they happened because I look on this section all the time, and I havent see any updates...not that Im disappointed :) Thanks for the many updates!! Anyway, this was great like usual and poor Luke having to go away and all just when he found some stability and love. Loved this chapter! Great chapter, update soon please!!!
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i need more! you're killing me here! i love your writing, keep it up!
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December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love you for writing; I don't know what I'd do without this sotry. I love it so much; please continue