rate_review Reviews

I absolutely LOVE your writing. Please continue. My favorite story ever. Lol
I actually look forward to this story every day after school. =]
Work hard in school!

Awww! I like the sap at times you need it like right now. Of course my boy Milo's got to grow some big cahunas and fight for his babe. I kinda liked them fighting and Milo taking care of Luke.

Didn't suck, neither do you! Nauseating is fine in short doses, sometimes needed even and your writer part knew it, even if your head didn't. Because... they happen for real, scenes like that and personally I'm glad they do. You only share that sappy stuff with people you'll never forget. It was short, but better than nothing so I'm not complaining. There is just something about this story, I can't quite figure out what...but please keep writing...

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!! DON'T SEPARATE THEM!!!!
ASOTA

Awwwwwwwwww *cries*. Luke's leaving, last day...*cries hysterically*. Hopefully the time will pass soon for the both of them, 'cause I dont think Milo can take much more lol. Great chapter, update soon please!!!!
PS-I like mushy chapters! They'er sweet :)!

Short but incredibly sweet and worth the wait.

CHAPTER 23 - again, hehe
Hi Jupiter
You don't really think what you are going to hell, I hope. The most that can happen is you getting on Santa's Naughty list (the different kind of "naughty* - cough, cough)So far so good. I like Doorways and Windows a lot, especially the delicate way you deal with your characters. They are almost like real people.

Merry Xmas :D

xDDDD I love this story! the love scene was very cute, though I admit I'm more the nitty gritty type, it was all in all very well done. Keep up the awesomeness!

I haven't reviewed in awhile. SORRY! These last couple of chapters have been great. It is about time some adult has come looking for Luke I mean really he is just a kid out in the world all along, so I'm happy you put some realism into the story. You are so talented because although this as a bit of a tragic story (understatement is I ever wrote one) You tell it with humor and emotions so compelling it keeps me coming back for more. I can't believe they finally had sex. more than 20 chapters in and you kept your readers interested without a sex scene. It is a testimony to your talent. Thank Goodness for Holiday Break. Please update at least once more before the break I get so excited when I see you have updated.

please update soon! i hope that luke is able to live with milo again!!!
ASOTA