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I even like your short chapters. Good work

I don't check for updates often because I know you are busy with school and all, but I love when I get a pleasent little surprise. This chapter pulled on the ole heart strings, but I'm happy the are handeling the seperation without running away, and Milo will finally go to schol again, that is a plus. Although I know these are fictional characters, and I know he is rich, I hate the thought of someone not even completing high school, when there is no real reason not too.

It might have been horrible (even if she's a fictional character, I still feel kinda horrible) but as she was walking towards their house, I kinda wanted Miranda to get hit by a bus.

I hope things start working out better for them soon! D=

KEEP THEM TOGETHER!!!! i'm gonna cry... please?
ASOTA

What a great chapter, if sad. My co writer wrote a story something like this part, with one boy younger than the other and them about to be separated, and the whole town adopted both them sort of so they could stay together. Maybe that's why I like this story so much...

But you're writing, first person, is just so good, so real... you definitely have the gift!! And Milo has such clear views, even simple things most people might not think to write, like the not rolling suitcases cuz lazy... I love this story and the way you tell it. I saw this update and just forgot everything else to read it!! So, thanks for that.. I hope they can stay together in the end, they just seem to be so good for each other.

I'm dying to know what you have in store for them! What sort of home Luke has. So please write fast!

This story is just so amazing. Realistic characters and realistically paced. This chapter has me heart broken... I feel so bad for them right now. They deserve more happiness... Gah. Update soon. Please!

awwww :(

Chapter 25

Wow!!! Shakespeare's line, "parting is such sweet sorrow" was never more well
portrayed than here!!! Really well done!! I feel the LOVE!!! I really look forward
to your next move!!!

Thanks,
R

*Cries* Nooooooo, *cries again*. Ok, Im fine now. I hope they manage to maintain their relationship, or I'll have like, I dunno, a meltdown...lol. Great chapter, update soon please!!!

It's short but sweet. =3 Dunno what else to say, but I feel like I should shout out that I'm still here an' reading. ^^