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by SallyJane

person blackswan2
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice plot line, interesting cliffie, and not bad spelling/grammer im pretty impressed. please update soon.
person spb1982
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
excellent, please go on, want to learn more!
schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Is it really so bad to want to know what people think?

I really like this story of mine, one of the few that I do like, but I don't want to be posting, having people read and no get feedback.

I mean, most writers like knowing what people think of their writing. And as cool as it's been to get hundreds of views, that doesn't mean you've read it and also doesn't mean you've like it.

I don't mind getting back reviews. Something like "It doesn't flow, it's hard to follow, why don't you just put names in?" Or something like that, I don't care. I just want to know what people think.

- The Author
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice beginning. Please continue, I would like to who does keep control.
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to admit I haven't read the story - and I won't.

It may be wonderful, but 'demanding reviews' turns me off completely... If YOU loved your story, you would HAVE to write it.