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for From the Ashes(Original)

by Kawanee

schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOOOHOOOO yet another wonderful update of my favorite story!
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, another great update of my favorite story! But, you know me, I must say : MORE MORE MORE! LMAO
person Persephone Noire
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good character development so far. I like the teaser at the beginning about demon hunting...got me curious right away. I can't wait to see what's so special about this girl.
person Persephone Noire
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the glimpses into the types of supernatural powers these people have are interesting. It reminds me of a table top roleplaying game I tried once called Aberrant. Phyre though, is starting to come off as both naive and suspicious in nature, which is perplexing at the moment.
person Persephone Noire
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I really like how Phyre's power manifested there. I love the X-men reference too, I'm a big x-men fan. ^_^
I thought I'd pretty much had the idea of what Phyre and Ember's powers were going to be, but there's definitely more depth here than I was expecting. You were right when you said it gets more interesting. Now...who is this Pheonix person? oO
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kawanee!!!!! You know that I love this story! Update SOOOON *inserts puppy dog eyes* :p LOL
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i can see that you like fire. i do too. ^^ so anyway it seems like its going to be an interesting story. can't wait to read more. just one question. does she work at wal-mart? lol. by the way thanks for reviewing my story and i am working on my next chapter hopefully it will be up within the next two weeks.