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for The sad valley girl!

by Ramsey

schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Funny stuff. The Rhyme scheme(if this was not meant to be prose) is a little off. So if this was meant to be serious and not just something silly to write you should work on that. If it WAS just meant to be something silly: good stuff. :-D
person ree
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HA HA HA...that was GENIUS! OH MY GOD!!! THAT WAS HILARIOUS!!!