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Yah! Jacky's finally doing something for herself. Hope she runs away with Harry. Please update soon.

This is really good, update soon

Hey! Okay, really good story so far...It's weird, while reading your fic, in some moments I think that Mark might actually love Jacky but then in other moments I think he just wants her to make himself feel powerful. I don't think I like Harry very much though. He doesn't seem like a very strong character. If he was, he'd have tried to help Jacky...not just listen to her problems. I really love the ending of this last chapter because Jacky seems like she's finally getting some power and maybe she can teach Mark some lessons. At this point, I don't think Mark or Harry deserve her. But I'll keep reading because you've got a great plot and you've got me hooked!

I think Mark...I like my "heroes" a bit rough :) Maybe you can soften him up a little later though. Good luck!

I like the first chapter. Keep it going.