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November 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
can't wait when she gives birth..i hope mark never finds out about her little affair i duno how he'll take it and go back to his beating ways..update soon..
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March 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing....I just wish it was finished or continued.
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
More more more more please...
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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my god
i absolutlyyy have fallen in love with this story its such....ohhhh idk its amazing
i absolutlyyy have fallen in love with this story its such....ohhhh idk its amazing
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August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Review for Chapter 1 to 15
Well I really thought I reviewed this story before, but it seems I haven't.
I felt really bad for Jackie, with the bad marriage and the loss of her parents. I really thought Harry would be her hero and was shocked when she actually left him. I see her point, but I don't know if he is completely at fault. The other big shocker is how Mark is now really changing. I just hope he doesn't go back to hitting her when the baby is born. I think the real test will come if and when she decided she wants to go back to school. Maybe he won't like the mother of his child going to school? That will only lead to other things right, like working? I mean, why would she want to work? But time can only tell.
The only thing I ask of you is to UPDATE SOONER!!!
Well I really thought I reviewed this story before, but it seems I haven't.
I felt really bad for Jackie, with the bad marriage and the loss of her parents. I really thought Harry would be her hero and was shocked when she actually left him. I see her point, but I don't know if he is completely at fault. The other big shocker is how Mark is now really changing. I just hope he doesn't go back to hitting her when the baby is born. I think the real test will come if and when she decided she wants to go back to school. Maybe he won't like the mother of his child going to school? That will only lead to other things right, like working? I mean, why would she want to work? But time can only tell.
The only thing I ask of you is to UPDATE SOONER!!!
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August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey i love it....MORE!
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August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Too bad you probably won't update soon... ah well. Keep up the great work!
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August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well it's about time!!!
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August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
im so glad u updated and i love where this is going... finally they are actually havin a relationship lol..please update soon
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August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWW!!!!!!! UPDATE! This is really really good!! How come you have so little reviews? Maybe you should change your summary :P