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by LittleMissPerfect

schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I was surprised when I read this, good surprised. There is a lot of information you gave but subtly so it’s not like someone is reading a history book. Good balance. I really want to see more of this.And there is also a lot to work from. There are even parts that made me laugh, and having funny parts in any story is a good thing. You did it well. Hope to read more of this soon!

E.M.
person Yusari
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really good!
The way these characters met was very screwed up! I would really look forward to seeing how the relationship develops.
(Btw, nice sex scene ;D)
Good luck. Don't DARE abondon this story!