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Ok, somehow I missed the chapter 10 update and only just found it now. I was so happy wanting to see what happens with this two. Especially, since his parents got away with murder, but good one - the butler did it.

Again, to see these two charactors working through their pain together is heart wrenching. But it seemed life went on for them. Then great news, she pregnant and then ... she leaves. Now, I know why, she is afraid that his family will do something again and I don't blame her, but to leave and not tell him. Wow, I didn't think she will do that.

Then the worst part, why would you end it there. The only thing that is keeping me calm is that I have just seen the sequel to this story. All I have to say is thank-god I would have been going crazy for weeks. Can you guess what I will be reading next? Oh, what does psh mean, I really have no idea.

So many questions! Is she doing this b/c she's scared of his reaction, his parents, or what?!

i really hope u make the sequel soon. i love this story.. and i really want to see what happens between the two characters.. so please write soon..

wow i really liked your story. It was different than what i usually read..it was really good. The only thing was that the end didnt make sense to me. We dont even have the slightest idea why she left. I think it would be god for u to make a sequel and maybe this time u can focus more on her feelings and why she left. Anyways keep up the good work, ur rly good. Good luck.

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You update faster then I can get on! AND WHAT DO YOU MEAN PSH?!?!?!?!?!? I beg you PLEASE do another! PLEASE! You can't just leave it there! I love everything about this story. From the great sex to the plot. AND I HATE HIS FAMILY! I WAS SO MAD! But now she's having another baby and then she just up and leaves! WHAT WAS WITH THAT?!?!?!? I am addicted to this and you can't just leave it there! PLEASE! There is more then just lust between these two and I can see it and I want it to develop! PLEASE! I am saying that a lot aren’t I? But then again…PLEASE DO A SEQUEL! I have to know what’s going to happen! Maybe, he finds her after a couple of years and he sees the kids and he’s just flabbergasted! But I understand why she left. I am guessing for fear of her baby and his parents. (Evil, snooty, EVIL people!)

Please do a sequel… :( Do you see the frowny face? That’s because I want another part! PLEASE!

Okay I will stop saying that…not…PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE

E.M.

Wow, this is so not want I expected. Don't get me wrong, I think it's really good just really unexpected. I didn't expect the pregnancy, I didn't expect her (very funny and very weird) family, I didn't expect him to be rich, and I didn't expect his (very mean) family. I mean I figured they won't be happy, but I really really didn't expect POISON!!!

I really like the way you had them sharing their pain, they way she wanted to escape from the memory and they way he just wanted to help her. The way they still cried a little through it and the way after they were done the pain came right back. The writing in chapter 7 really made me care for these two charactors, I was so sad for them I almost cried. Oh, I like her family's reaction, it's just what you would expect from a weird family. A very weird reaction.

Please tell me someone will be jailed for the poisoning, you can't just do something like that and not get arrested.

@4 - Now that was hot! hahaha. And I adore how he makes sure she is comfortable. So romantic!
@5 - Her family is kinda scary. But what would a family be if it wasn't messed up a little?!?

Are we going to meet his family? We did get a little background but not enough! He seems so mysterious and different. But I don’t know why I think that...Hope to see more soon!
E.M.

Well, you can count this as my third review for your wonderful story. I like everything about #3. Really funny and we get to know more about the characters. But be careful about doing the happydance on your coffee table, wouln't want you to get hurt! haha.
E.M.

That was perfect. Loved the end. Just perfect.

Okay is this a kinky, vampire sex story or what - and does he want the baby ???????