rate_review Reviews

Is English your first language? This is easily the worst story I have ever read. You don't mention Abby's freakishly huge breasts until they're convenient (when her "mother," who apparently looks nothing like her and seems to be too young to have a 17-year-old daughter, shows up) and you clearly haven't the slightest clue as to the mechanics of genetic engineering, lesbian sex, or basic law enforcement. Walking around totally naked outside? A 17-year-old girl who, somehow, has never known neither her mother nor her father, lives alone, and hasn't had a run-in with Child Protective Services? And who is doing pornography while underage (illegal) with a horse (also illegal and often deadly due to internal trauma)? Oh, a few things about breasts: they're not measured like you'd measure a box (ever hear of cup sizes?) and anyone with breasts as apparently enormous as Abby's would have crippling back and shoulder pain.