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for Unexpected Places

by MakaiKitty

person elyn
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! I'm soooo happy for this ending! I actually sort of guessed what would happen, but I only hoped it would be true, and didn't dare let myself think I might be right, LOL. It often happens that when I get too cocky about knowing the ending, the author goes and makes it a sad one or a different one! :oD But I guessed right, thank goodness! As much as sad endings might be realistic, I love happy endings even more. And that concludes another one of your lovely stories! I can't wait to see more from you! And I'm definitely a big fan of yours! :o)
person Anna Belle
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I did like it and now i want more. i found myself becoming addictive to your stories espeically the chance stories. I've read the other ones but the bunny boy is my favorite and I've been wondering if you're adding another story to the collection.
person Anna Belle
schedule March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I hope he doesn't kill Kinder. That'd be too sad.
Update soon, please
person elyn
schedule March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hee hee, you totally drew me in, lock, stock and barrel! I read through the whole thing and enjoyed every bit of it. And yes, I did guess what was going to happen from just about the point that Kinder first started talking, but that's just because I've read way too many books and watched way too many movies so that I can guess a lot of the plot in most everything I watch or read. I don't know what's going to happen next, though! Anyway, I totally enjoyed reading the story. And I want very, very much to see the last chapter! Please! Don't leave me in the agony of not knowing! :oP
schedule March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!
person Joasia
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
heee~ As Garett's steed (some kind of horsie?) just stares wide eyed at the two guys runnin' into the storm...

^O_O^ uugh... yeah... i'll.. just.. ya know... hold down the fort'n'all....

but i can't really be sure~ ^^;;

I like this story~ Your ideas are nicely unique~~~ and I've for this story bookmarked so i can keep tabs on it~~~
:3 Awesome!! Please write more~ **hugs**
person Sjonna
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No, please don't stop there! Please! This is awsome!
person Joasia
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
n___n

this is an good good start. you have a nice style, not forced. and the plot is original and interesting~~~~
i'm curious now and awaiting the continuation of this story~~~~~~ yaay~~

X3 Demons make such good subject matter... hee~

Please add more soon~~~