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Wow and I thought I got demented! LOL update soon. It’s disturbingly interesting. I used to write gory stories but I had to stop when I was sent to a councilor when I stupidly showed my teacher what I wrote in a poem for freshman year. Now I’m a good girl. So, yeah keep it up. Might I suggest you do a series of different people and point of views?

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Scary. Very good writing, mega kudos.

Very gruesome. (Which I gather was your intention.)

I like how you slowly reveal the backstory.

Just VERY hard to imagine Danny boy could survive for another chapter...

I like it. It was good. I especially like the begining bit about a woman laughing. I hope you do update this. *offers fudge for inspiration*