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by fierygoddess

person madaz75
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is good,
Great attempt at what I suspect an irish accent with your characters..
I hope this is the start of something more.
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a great quickie read (in more than one sense of the term). I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical errors, and the Scottish accent was a surprising touch, though not a bad one.

You've impressed me with this one. Keep up the great work!

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