rate_review Reviews

I think elton was an ass for assuming she would accept. I like col, dispite his weirdo behaviour :)

NEITHER! I really dislike the male influences in this book. Elton is a selfish prick who obviously doesn't love/care much about her and Col... I hate men who treat women like objects. He doesn't seem to care about her feelings; Oh, I just beat her up... It's in the past I gave her sex that wasn't just what I want, now she has no choice! is the vibe I'm kinda getting from this chappy

BDSM Bill: >=D *chains you to a wall and hits you over the head with a chair*

Oh boo. My review didn't go through. ;__;

Anyway, like I said before my review vanished, I think she should stick with Col. I love how they compete with one another's fiery personalities, and yet, in certain situations, how they soften around one another as well. I think they complement one another much more perfectly than our heroine and Elton. To me, their relationship has that perfect harmony of passion, lust, and ever-growing love. <333

And besides all of this, I think this story is absolutely magnificent. I keep coming back for more; the plotline is a great balance of eroticism and affection. Wonderful! <33

EXCELLENT UPDATE! I think you know which way I vote, but to make it official - Col. The girl has to end up the the bad boy, that is what dreams are made of.

Very good fight, it was just right for the story. I can hardly wait for the Col confrontation. I have to admit I miss him, I am not into Elton, I like Col!

I absolutely adore this story! The characters are wonderful. And he reminds me so much of my own true love :)

Good writing. Please please please continue!

Inari pwns. But my fav is agedashi tofu. I'm not japanese, many assume I am. I go to japanese school though on saturday^^

*looks at BDSM Bill* Ewww... not sure I wanna know what you used him for.

I think the introduction of marrage was way too early and perhaps a little unessisary. But I look forward to seeing how you weave in into the story

I'll send Bill after ya if you don't update!

Ohhhh this is getting good!! It was good already, but this is interesting. Please continue quickly. Where does this leave Col?

Do you like inari? I looove inari. Most people I know hate it and think I'm crazy O_o

Okay, maybe I am.
Enough ranting, I really liked the fact she gained indipendence from being an object in a belivible way.

I hate Col's charictar sooo freakin' much >8( *stabs* ...Sorry... You kinda need him for your story... umm... you can use my sock puppet? *Ducks under table and holds up puppet, muffled voice* Herrow! I'm BDSM Bill!
Maybe not.

Anyway, sorry for ranting too much^^ love your fic

This was a great update. Looking foward to seeing what Col does next! I hope I dont have to wait too long to find out. Thank you for the great update.