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March 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
nice story... I liked it. I did have a problem with the run-on sentences...working on those would make the story even better... :3 good job.
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June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
SpankMonkey1_69@hotmail.com
This was quite the interesting piece. Pretty humourous considering how deep in denial the main character is. In all honesty it reminds me of something I'd do/say. Yeah, absolute denial.
This was, again, good. I hope to see more of your work sometime soon, Whenever you get the chance or inspiration. Till then, take care.
This was quite the interesting piece. Pretty humourous considering how deep in denial the main character is. In all honesty it reminds me of something I'd do/say. Yeah, absolute denial.
This was, again, good. I hope to see more of your work sometime soon, Whenever you get the chance or inspiration. Till then, take care.
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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice story, a little sad and strange, but i liked it a lot
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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lolz~ I like this story~ It is so nice. esp the part where the 'I am not gay' when he obviously like the mystery man keke~
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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha! I think it's funny. Neat style, too!
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June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kyle
This is something so different and so unique it rocked me to my core. I don't think your purpose was to be hott rumbling sex, I liked the simplicity and depth this piece has. And I love the feeling a person is left with once finished. ^^ great job ^^
This is something so different and so unique it rocked me to my core. I don't think your purpose was to be hott rumbling sex, I liked the simplicity and depth this piece has. And I love the feeling a person is left with once finished. ^^ great job ^^
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June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How strange! What struck me about this piece is the careless dispassionate story of it.
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June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Continuing from the previous post. It is good nontheless.
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June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked this. It reminds me of my own style of writing, and it had an amazing flow to it. [:
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January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Strange and cold and just what I needed to wake up.
Denial is a hard think to overcome.
Denial is a hard think to overcome.