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May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far! Keep the chapters coming please!
schedule
May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
;o;
i love this chapter!
jack is such a sweet, innocent boy.
im glad that edward isnt all lusty and ... wanting to corrupt him.
:) edward is my 7 year old cousins's name. aklfjklafjklar
... so im trying not to picture little eddie.
i love this chapter!
jack is such a sweet, innocent boy.
im glad that edward isnt all lusty and ... wanting to corrupt him.
:) edward is my 7 year old cousins's name. aklfjklafjklar
... so im trying not to picture little eddie.
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May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yayness! You got update happy this week! I really like how this story is developing. Even though Jack's story is sad it has a much happier feel to it than I Broke Down. Not that I don't love that story as well.
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May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT. I love the two of the. So cute!!! Please continue soon.
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May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is a cute story so far
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwe, this story is really cute so far (I'm just a sucker for kids I guess). I was a tad bit disappointed reading all those warning tags and then nothing came up yet though to be honest. But pacients is a virtue and I'm sure it will come eventually. Can't wait for the next update, Hun. Keep up the good work *hearts*
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay! keep goin with this one, its got an interesting plot. i like the way youve built up the characters so much already, so please continiue with it.
schedule
May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! I'm digging this bad! I love this, please continue with it.
Jack is soooo cute. >_< Good writing skillz ftw! = You are an awesome writer!
<333 Thank you for this wonderful story!
Jack is soooo cute. >_< Good writing skillz ftw! = You are an awesome writer!
<333 Thank you for this wonderful story!
schedule
May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more, i demand more!!!!!!
from your imperial highness, 13
from your imperial highness, 13
schedule
May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^^ Read it and thought that it was really good. I really can't wait to read more. Bwahahhaah can I read it before you release it online??