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Aw! This story is so sweet, plz update soon!!!

Rukia

what is wrong with you!!!!
you need to up date. i am geting impatiant and you dont want to see a queen when shes
impatiant!!!!

from her angry royal highness, Imperial 13

nice! 1 down, 1 to go

More, please?

Uh, no thanks you can keep your lasanga. It'll be interesting to see if anything devolops between them before the trial. Hopefully by that time they can stay together!

Intriguing story so far. I'm glad the teacher isn't outright trying to corrupt Jack - makes it so much more interesting than most of the stories here. Can't wait to see what's next.

i want lasagna :( *sigh* now im hungry

oh yeah woops...ummm this chapter was good... i liked the part where he was kissing jack's neck while sleeping

though what teenager wants to g to the mall and be seen with a teacher???

Oh…. I misread it, I thought the STUDENT was the virgin….wow…lol, that's...something else. Hahaha. Is it wrong for me to find humor in such this like Edward wishing he didn’t wake up in the morning because he’s never had some? It seemed pretty funny, but I sympathize as well especially once the reasons why come into the picture. Those strict, religious families drive me crazy, especially when it starts getting the better of their sexually confused Children who in turn become the victims of THEIR hate and the hate they soon grow towards themselves. I just can't see how a forgiving God could call true love--despite who it may be with--a sin. And...Edward’s a cranky teacher, no? Awwww, Jack’s a cutie though! They'd make a nice couple Great first chapter, moving on..

Mm...Spinach lasagna, LOVE that stuff. Jack seems almosts perfect, and they get along decent so far. Could be love......

awwww!
this is getting cuter and cuter
i just wanna steal jack and hide him and feed him and hug him and pet him and....
um... yeah
please update again soon, i wants to know what happens at the mall ^^