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January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More more more!!!
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January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, I've been reading this for awhile, and beside the typos (I can relate with SOME typos, becuase it's only writing-for-fun) it is an excellent story.
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January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
They keep this up and their might be little fur balls on the way. hehehheee
This is great can't wait for more soon..
This is great can't wait for more soon..
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January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow! loved it! keep goin! woot woot!
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January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!! I love this story! The beast better kill off those men! After all she is his mate right? Cause he pierced her neck with his teeth which means he marked her? And we know that beasts are really protective over their mates! However I'm sad that she got orally rapped. Poor thing.
So what will happen next? Will she give birth to the beast's children? And who is the beast, is he a man who turns into a beast.........please post soon!
So what will happen next? Will she give birth to the beast's children? And who is the beast, is he a man who turns into a beast.........please post soon!
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January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!! I love this story! The beast better kill off those men! After all she is his mate right? Cause he pierced her neck with his teeth which means he marked her? And we know that beasts are really protective over their mates! However I'm sad that she got orally rapped. Poor thing.
So what will happen next? Will she give birth to the beast's children? And who is the beast, is he a man who turns into a beast.........please post soon!
So what will happen next? Will she give birth to the beast's children? And who is the beast, is he a man who turns into a beast.........please post soon!
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January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see what the creature does to them.
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January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story so far. Keep going with it:)
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January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
whoo hoo! great stuff, great stuff! keep going! please keep writing!
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January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beauty and the Beast, Indian-style, that's creative, and it actually makes some kind of sense in a way since they do believe in animal spirits. I can't tell whether this is meant to be in the present because of the language or in the past because of the setting and it needs proofreading, but otherwise it's good. Keep writing! ^-^