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for Sanctuary

by janette

schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh trust me, I'm still addicted!!! I was so happy for the next chapter!!!!! I can't WAIT for more!!! Please update soon!!!
person jayree05
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh geez. Poor Augie. Can't wait for more. As always, so much love.
person Kawanee
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Liking the story so far.. when's the next update?
person charis
schedule February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Too short. So want more of this.
Nando is going to abuse Augie and then he's going to get caught by the little sweetheart. Caught tween and Augie and a Widower. Should be fun.
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!! I am addicted to it now!!!!!
person Nessa
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay. there's more more!
I like all the information we are getting about sanctuary as well as the characters and Angelo and D. and A from other eyes.
:)
person Jennifer
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit that I'm a little confused as to who Nando is, exactly. Perhaps that is just due to the fact that I haven't read the storyline in so long. I love this fic, however. As usual, your writing is extrordinary. I guess I should expect that by now though. You have to keep me updated on all your work.
person jayree05
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh janette.... I love you.
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think the added scene fits, though I think the next chapter will help everyone understand a lot more of what's going on here. Might wanna run over this once more, though, for some typos. But I like it, of course. XD

I feel bad for Tyler. ;__; Poor thing! But that's just how it goes, lol. Laramie is hard to feel sorry for, but I'm sure we'll get more of a taste of his personality as the story goes. As it is, he's bordering on selfish asshole himself. The only reason he isn't is because next to Angelo he comes across as a saint.

Keep it up, hon! Can't wait for more. ^^ I've been pimping the story out so more people know about it.
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow. This is a wonderful story, I'm definately hooked. But then again, include some sort of unknown social structure - like the Sanctuary - into a story, and automatically I'm intriuged as to how it works. I'll definately have to check out your other stories. Anyway, on top of being interesting, this is really well-written. I hope it's more than one chapter?