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for Blood Oranges

by orbitingjupiter

person anon
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you are totally making me cry!!!
person Anna Belle
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
To lazy to log in but this chapter was so sad.
person elyn
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hee hee, but the smut is so much fun! And nothing like sex to help with the grieving process! *giggles uncontrollably* Wow, too hyper. Ahem, anyway, yay, sex! Wow, I guess I didn't really move on. I'm such a pervert, but once my mind is on sex, it totally fixates. So, the chapter was great! Especially, surprise surprise, the sex! ;o) And I can't wait for the next one! Sorry, that was short and full of exclamation points. Sort of like my brain. Which doesn't make sense.
person Michelle
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
despite this being in the romance section i doubt you will get many objects to the smut. from me, at least. keep it up.
person schen
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hi, liked your fic, it's hot! hot! hot! update soon!
person Jenna T.
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17 - Hunny, no one is complaining about the smut. Add as MUCH or as little smut as you want. Because, god, that was hot. Somehow I knew Nate would be doing the well...umm...penetration. Because he wasn't exactly topping now was he? Haha. Yeah...

Is it just me or do your updates get shorter and shorter? Well, come to think of it, this was a tad bit longer than the last chap. Oh well. Who cares? I still love your story to death.
person Jenna T.
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I was wrong. He WAS ontop. How did I figure that he wasn't? Well, whatever.
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, I love your writing, I love your smut. Keep up the good work.
person jayree05
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you know, smut is perfectly ok. But I'm excited about a return to plot. Can't wait!
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 17
Hi, Jupiter,
That was so hot! Smocking hot.

Oaks ( or Nathaniel, was it?) just lost his virginity to a boy name Aspen. He doesn't even know his real name. I was wondering about Aspen, is he a runaway? He is all mysterious and seems very lonely.