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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why, Why would Aspen do that. I guess Oakes was getting to close. I love your writing, because you make me feel the characters emotions. Happy or Sad I feel them and I love that. But I remember you told me you like happy endings so I know this sadness will not be the end, and that makes me very happy!
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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am glad you enjoy writing it for it's only fair since we enjoy so much reading it! hehe
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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love this chapter! keep it up, I love the chars and the story line intreagues me so. I wonder what happens next!
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May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good Story + Short Chapters = One unsatisfied Reader
At least you update often enough.
At least you update often enough.
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May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch 22:
That's horrible. He got his heart ripped out, I hope that he finds Aspen somewhere. Love and heartbreak is the worst pain in the world really.
That's horrible. He got his heart ripped out, I hope that he finds Aspen somewhere. Love and heartbreak is the worst pain in the world really.
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May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
waitwaitwait. is this over? D: noooooo! i hope it's not.... i love this story....
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May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
god this is heart-wrenching. it seemed a given he would leave, but when he did it was such a blow and so sudden. he has to come back!
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May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Will Oakes ever learn Aspen's real name? Will Aspen stall or will he run away? Whast happens when Oakes has to go back to school. So may questions. I can't wait to find out what you decided. You are a great writer. I know you have been really busy and this story is taking a lobg time to unfold but don't be discourged. Great works of art take time.
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May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was way too short. Update soon...Please
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May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is actually pretty well done; I love the plot as well as the characters, and the flow of the story isn't rush nor too slow.
keep up the good work; I wonder what will happen with the boy's relationship further down
keep up the good work; I wonder what will happen with the boy's relationship further down