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January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe
I smiled through the entire chapter, now my &^%$# face hurts.
I'd point out the lines that got to me the most, but I just can't write half the chapter in this little box, forgive me.
I adore both the characters.
That was good, what can I say. I loved it.
I smiled through the entire chapter, now my &^%$# face hurts.
I'd point out the lines that got to me the most, but I just can't write half the chapter in this little box, forgive me.
I adore both the characters.
That was good, what can I say. I loved it.
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January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's Shanna, I was a faithful reviewer on you last story and I actually only got an account so I could review your story. I look forward to seeing where this goes. I will be checking every Wednesday. I hadn't realized you had started a new story because it is under slash and I usually don't read those, but I figured for you I would give it a try.
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January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This time on a Greyhound bus! I like our love interest, very unaffected and direct.
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January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You already started the new story, wow.
It's not easy to say much about a first chapter, but what I can say is this: a) it's a promising beginning, and b) I like how you once more managed to portray a character's emotions convincingly. And what an interesting character he is. ^-^
I'm lookong forward to more chapters.
It's not easy to say much about a first chapter, but what I can say is this: a) it's a promising beginning, and b) I like how you once more managed to portray a character's emotions convincingly. And what an interesting character he is. ^-^
I'm lookong forward to more chapters.
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January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it. A thoughtful start, though I'll be honest and say that I don't want to wait forever for the other guy to show. 47 hours is a long time and real relationships have started in less.I'll deff. belooking for more !!!
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January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay this story is starting out so sad, but good! I love the Nathaniel! Just like a teenage boy, or is he in college now? Oh well, keep up the good work, I'll keep my eye out for this story!
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January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Read the intro
it's not much to go on...but it was funny in parts 'not gonna hump them in the shower, =) and of course its sad cuz of where he's going.
I do think your writing is very good. I'll be able to give a better review when I've read more, just wanted you to know I am interested and like the character.
please write on...
it's not much to go on...but it was funny in parts 'not gonna hump them in the shower, =) and of course its sad cuz of where he's going.
I do think your writing is very good. I'll be able to give a better review when I've read more, just wanted you to know I am interested and like the character.
please write on...
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January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooo new story me likey