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-- "What?" I think I just squealed.

*giggles*

He's kind of adorable, really. And Aspen is just getting weirder and weirder. But I like him nevertheless. He's fun to read. Oh, and a very nice first kiss. *smiles dreamily*

I went all squealy when I found that you not only updated this one, but that there's a third story by you! Squeesquee! Must go now and read it.

this is very interesting.
such original ideas.
original people
love it.

Very, very weird, yes. But totally intriguing. You have me at the edge of my seat, trembling for more. So, please don't feel pushed or anything, but update soon. Aspen really calls for more information. The way he talks and acts reminds me of another literary character I once came across, a "magician" from India. Is he some kind of, dunno, shaman (or what they're called)? Oh, and I liked it very much how easy it is for him to touch people, to touch Oakes. And how surprised Oakes was at being touched, now of all times, by this stranger. It's what he needs now, I think, and it felt good to read this, if that makes sense. But "I fall in love easily" sounds rather ominous ... Please, update soon. Like tomorrow. Yes? It's my birthday tomorrow, and another chapter would be such a nice present. ^-^

awww.... so cute. I get so excited when I see you've updated.

Who is Aspen actually.. Gosh the guy is odd but very interesting.. hope that we can learn more about him soon... update soon neh?

This is a really touching story. Aspen is so...intruiging. And charismatic. You're doing a wonderful job and I can't wait to see how the story progresses.

Interesting ^^ Would love to see where this goes.

lol. he touched him!. sooo personal. people dont do that... unless. lol. nvm
hehe

Chapter 2 - I don't know what to say, really. Your stories are so amazing. But what makes them so amazing is that your characters have such realistic and distinct personalities. For example, I love how forward the 'love interest' is. Makes the reader automatically like him. Well, maybe that's just me but whatever. And I love Nathaniel's angsty mind rant. So, basically, what I'm trying to say is that I love this story and PLEASE update soon!

"I think it's more in the eyes. Not one particular colour - more like if you start to look at them you'll get so concentrated on trying to figure out what colour they actually are that you'll forget that you're looking into his eyes until you've been staring for what could be considered a socially inappropriate long time. Not unlike I catch myself doing right now." -- I was grinning half-way through this, and giggling by the end of it. Loved it!! And you've got me curious: what colour do his eyes have?

Talking about curious (nice word, that): that guy is really curious (curious in the weird meaning), and I'm really curious about him (curious in the I-really-really-want-to-know-more-about-that-guy-and-preferably-right-
now meaning). I will resort to nail-biting until you update.

And who cares whether this story will be long or short as long as you keep writing it? I don't. Though, of course, I'd love to have a very long story. ^-^ I always do. But it's your muse. Do what they tell you. I'll read it anyway.

^-^

Yeah, you have a squee-ish fangirl here! *squee*

CA