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This is good,looking forward to next part!

Oh wow, I loved this chapter. I mean, how many different emotions can you fit into one chapter?

Apparently, lots and at all extremes..Oakes worrying. Well, so he's lonely and intrigued and yet knows not to put any more hope than he has to into someone who 'is easily distracted'

Your dialogue between these two just cracks me up, I burst out laughing a couple times. And that kiss and all god, why oh why was that one of the hottest I ever read, I have no idea...

It was sad...almost cliffhanger sad at the end...and the guys still a mystery. I never heard of blood oranges...is that a real fruit?

Sorry this isn't a better review, this chapter deserves one. No...seriously...it was that perfect. Thank you very much for it.

chapter 6

Whatever Aspen's name really is, he does have a past he'll talk about, which is a good thing. I think anyone would get frustrated by too much mystery. He's definitely taking Oakes' mind off where he's going, off his sadness. He thinks it's lame to be sad, so he must see this as a favor.

You've made them getting to know each other sort of fun, like much younger kids than they are would, but it still works because of Aspen's personaltiy.

Now, is Aspen gonna back off and make Oakes come after him? Or will he just keep working on him. He falls in love easy, hmmm...does he fall out easy, too? Is he even what he seems?

Thanks for this interesting, sad, happy alittle creepy story...I like it alot...and look forward to more...

interesting... now we managed to find out a little bit more about the two.. hope you can update soon~

I am adding this story to 'Golden Nuggets (Original Slash List)', Rants/Journals section,
Only my personal favorites made the list:)
Thank you so much for writing!

Aspen is all mystery, It is hard for me to get next to him. If I were Oakes I would be weirded out by him a little. You have diffidently written a very original character there. I would like to find out why he is the way he is. Oh yeah, that 1st kiss was very cute.

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I'm loving this story. ALOT. I can't wait for the next chapter.

This is very unique..i hope we get to learn about the mystery boy...i also hope this isn't destined for a sad ending..to many sad endings..

wow your sure making that Aspen into a mystery, yet a really cool one...

And you also managed to make one kiss more...uh, uh...hot than alot of complete smut scenes.

This is adorable!

And this review sucks, sorry, my brain's fried from doing research, but I love it and you're a great writer, and will be waiting for more. Soon, I hope. Very soon.

God i am dying of curiosity... WHo is ASpen!! His past lif e will be revealed no? Please I hope so~ more more!