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for Blood Oranges

by orbitingjupiter

person Jenna T.
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5 - I bet Aspen escaped from a Mental Hospital.
person dut
schedule March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
All snuggled up.. sweet.... The dream about his mother is so touching...
person luck_eme
schedule March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
chapters 8 and 9

I missed one somehow *shrugs*

Great...it was one of the more real scenes I've read...and it was sweet too, but not overly, perfect.

That Oakes can't forget why he's on that bus makes all the more real. Who could? But the distraction would definitely be welcome.

So well done so far. Still intrigueing and I'll definitely be following it under romance, along with the other one. I should take a shot at the third one...I will one of these days. Okay, thanks!
schedule March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this story please review, and thanks for moving it to the romance section. I was wondering why it was in Slash anyway.
schedule March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 9
Hi, orbiting jupiter ,
Wow, nine chapters already. This story is a mystery, really, who is Aspen? I even thought that he was an alien for a while, hehe. Will we ever learn about him or he is just going to abandon Oaks on the end? Pretty cool so far.

It's fine if you move it to a Romance Section, I will find it:) Why, though? They are all slash, after all. Wish that we had a Slash Romance section, that would be convinient:)
person dut
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gosh that is one amazing stunt! Its not even in the back row of a theater but a BUS!! Its they're First intimate action! Yay!
person jayree05
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I do so love this story...
person luckeme
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7

That guys such a tease. He'd be easy to fall for, really, but someone to wary of at the same time.

Awww, what a sweet touch, smoothing the worry lines...

It was short, but it was good. Me like. Very much.

You made these characters so interesting...
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have a sick parent and I know how important it is to have a distraction even if it is for a little while those distractions are oh so important. I know Oakes should be glad to have Aspen on that bus with him even if her is a little coo coo. You have developed some memorable characters that I want to read more about. Keep up the good work.
Shanna
person dut
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
alright we finally get to know a little bit more about the both of them... especially Aspen! Gosh had he just ran away from another foster parent and then met Oakes?! As usual, great chapter.

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