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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12 - Well, now, THAT was very, very interesting. Hmm... the whole Mr. Smelly made me laugh. But it's true! Although, my mango was green. I think. It's been a while.
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March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11 - That was cute. "And you have magical saliva or what?" Update soon! Because I just worship this story!
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March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chatpter 10 was so HOT. I love your writing. I can picture everything you write so clearly, it is like a movie. You are great. And I'm falling in love with Aspen. He was very strage at 1st but as he opens up, I feel for hime, and just want to know more and more.
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March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10 - Oh my. The things people do on the bus! I was just on the Greyhound like...last week and I'm going on it again this week. Hmm. I'm going to be on the lookout for any...ahem...sexual activities. But that little snippet of Aspen's life was kinda cute...and sad. I'd like to know how it got 'heavy', though. But I'm sure that'll come later. Amazing update!
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March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah. This one made me drunk. Like, fic-drunk. It's really hard to explain...and only a handful of works can do that to me. (And all of said works are finished, published products -- like_I Am Not Myself These Days_, to boot.) You have a serious gift. I love the story -- which is fantastic, considering that I typically hate this genre of narrative. Beautiful job. I hope to see more~
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March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty awesome. Can't wait to read more.
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March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8 - God. I keep forgetting to review! I just keep clicking the next chapter because I just want to know what happens next. I mean...jesus. I just absolutely love your writing. It's so fresh and quirky and hot. Fucking hot. I'm not making any sense but damn. I love this story.
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March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9 - It's very rare that I'm at a loss for words with each chapter. I always figure out something to say. Damn. Well, I just blame it on this story being so good. Because it is, y'know, so good. I hope you update soon!
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March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey!
See, I haven't either given up on you nor been kidnapped by aliens. I merely removed myself from Germany to New Zealand, and it took some time for me to settle down. Plus, I didn't have internet access until today. It's still not what it's supposed to be but... well. But enough babbling, on with the review.
Girl, I squealed when I saw how many new chapters there are to this story! Yay! And such nice chapters. I really liked the answer-and-question game. It highlighted the past of both boys, and at least partly explained Aspen's weirdness. Hopping from foster parents to foster parents can't be all that healthy for the mind. Reading the chapter felt like doing a jigsaw puzzle: little bits coming together to form a larger image, but the bits are still too sparse to get more than a vague idea of what the image looks like.
Oh, and then chapter 8! Delicious. I bit my lip along with Oakes since my friend was sitting right next to me at the table (and she's a nice girl, but hasn't yet been subjected to me at full squealy, nor has she yet discovered the joys of reading slash. I shall introduce her to both in time). Really nice chapter. ^-^
But I've come to believe that this isn't going to be an alltogether nice story. Or is it? There are things Aspen says, like "I leave everybody" (or something like that). Shall I get the hankies out? On the other hand, I've started having some really weird ideas of what is going on. No, I won't tell you. I'm not going to embarrass myself like that. I'll wait till you tell me. But with the way Oakes and Aspen interact, and then that dream in chapter 9 ...
Ah, well. I suppose I'll see in time. Keep writing. There's at least this one reader who will keep waiting for more. ^-^
CA
See, I haven't either given up on you nor been kidnapped by aliens. I merely removed myself from Germany to New Zealand, and it took some time for me to settle down. Plus, I didn't have internet access until today. It's still not what it's supposed to be but... well. But enough babbling, on with the review.
Girl, I squealed when I saw how many new chapters there are to this story! Yay! And such nice chapters. I really liked the answer-and-question game. It highlighted the past of both boys, and at least partly explained Aspen's weirdness. Hopping from foster parents to foster parents can't be all that healthy for the mind. Reading the chapter felt like doing a jigsaw puzzle: little bits coming together to form a larger image, but the bits are still too sparse to get more than a vague idea of what the image looks like.
Oh, and then chapter 8! Delicious. I bit my lip along with Oakes since my friend was sitting right next to me at the table (and she's a nice girl, but hasn't yet been subjected to me at full squealy, nor has she yet discovered the joys of reading slash. I shall introduce her to both in time). Really nice chapter. ^-^
But I've come to believe that this isn't going to be an alltogether nice story. Or is it? There are things Aspen says, like "I leave everybody" (or something like that). Shall I get the hankies out? On the other hand, I've started having some really weird ideas of what is going on. No, I won't tell you. I'm not going to embarrass myself like that. I'll wait till you tell me. But with the way Oakes and Aspen interact, and then that dream in chapter 9 ...
Ah, well. I suppose I'll see in time. Keep writing. There's at least this one reader who will keep waiting for more. ^-^
CA
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3 - How the hell did I miss seven chapters of this? God. I can't believe that! Oh well. Anyways, I love Aspen. He reminds me of...well... my bestfriend. Only without the sarcasm. But the forward...ness and odd...ness is the same.