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for Blood Oranges

by orbitingjupiter

person elyn
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've really enjoyed your story so far! Aspen is cute. He reminds me of someone I know who is frustratingly adorable and eccentric, where sometimes you just want to bop him over the head, but he's just so cute! :oP I'm liking the development between the two, but I really hope Aspen doesn't just leave in the end. I would cry. Anyway, can't wait to see more!
person !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
another update!!!!!!!!!!!

i feel totally spoiled AND I'M LOVING IT!! hehe

keep up the excellent work ;)
person !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was really good!!!!!!!!
I'm so glad that you updated

Altho I'm still trying to come up with an idea as to how aspen can stay. or at least appear 3 yrs down the track with a different name

THANKS HEAPS FOR THE UPDATE!!!
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Reviewing chapter 14" I'm almost in tears. That was a very emotional ending and I felt it. Like a sence of helplessness, like what can I do and I should be doing more. "Soul-Sad" I like that term. Keep up the good work and please update again over ther weekend. I'm begging!
person Elizabeth
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is so good, I'm really liking both of the main characters. Great job!
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cute Chapter. I'm happy Aspen seems to be opening up even if he is like an onion and has so many layers it will take a lifetime to peel to the core.
person !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love the play of words... actions... everything between the 2 of them
this is masterfully done
person jayree05
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You better finish... I'll send minions after you (cause I have those).
schedule March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVE this story! You are an excellent writer. Please update soon.
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the Slash explanation. Do you know I have been reading on this site for at least a year and never understood that? I deleted the review because I was embarrassed by my ignorance. I guess if I like it, I just like it. I'm really enjoying this story. I'm falling in love with Aspen. I can't wait until he tells us more about him. Wow I just love the way your stories pull me in. Update soon.