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October 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hello Kanashii... It's Susan from the group. How are you?
I found this amazing story while surfing. It is wonderful! Did you write it for our mutual friend, Tonypony? I'll bet he loved it. I can see how you and he would have instantly clicked.
Pardon me calling myself by my Pony name, it was just too similar to your male pony characters name for me not to. :)
Well done, and all my best wishes to you.
Susan
I found this amazing story while surfing. It is wonderful! Did you write it for our mutual friend, Tonypony? I'll bet he loved it. I can see how you and he would have instantly clicked.
Pardon me calling myself by my Pony name, it was just too similar to your male pony characters name for me not to. :)
Well done, and all my best wishes to you.
Susan
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July 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love the story. I tried looking for the other Pony Play stories, but I couldn't find them. Are they on here, or a different site?
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May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for your review on Snow White Caballo. I haven't been to this place much since I had my little one and I only just recently checked back in. So while I had time and while I could, I read this.
It was good and I like that you combine more than just Sexual encounters in the story. I like plot and I like a good story. Believe it or not, I am not into Pony play myself and Snow White Caballo was really my first attempt at a story like that. I just tried to put my self in that kind of plave and write. I guess it turned out alright.
Anyways. Yeah...That whole Silk issue. Ouch and the spurs. *Shivers* You managed to display the differences between people very well. Keep writing and should you add another chapter or respond to this, use e mail. It's more likely going to get answered that way. As I said...my baby keeps me pretty busy so free time at the computer is rare.
Keep going
Starfyre
It was good and I like that you combine more than just Sexual encounters in the story. I like plot and I like a good story. Believe it or not, I am not into Pony play myself and Snow White Caballo was really my first attempt at a story like that. I just tried to put my self in that kind of plave and write. I guess it turned out alright.
Anyways. Yeah...That whole Silk issue. Ouch and the spurs. *Shivers* You managed to display the differences between people very well. Keep writing and should you add another chapter or respond to this, use e mail. It's more likely going to get answered that way. As I said...my baby keeps me pretty busy so free time at the computer is rare.
Keep going
Starfyre
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December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is this the end of the story? If so, amazing job! Totally erotic and just incredible!
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August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooohhh! Please continue this! I LOVE it!
I've never actually thought about ponyplay before, but now you've got me intrigued! You've inspired a multitude of ponyplay plot bunnies to start pawing at my feet, hoping to be picked up, cuddled and shown some attention!
You are an amazing writer, and it was nice to see Laurence again in another role. It suits him. Everything suits him when you're writing it.
*hugs tight*
Love Nila
ficchantress1218@gmail.com
AIM: Lucifers Ayngel (I promise I'm not a devil worshiper)
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YIM: luiniltelcontar
I've never actually thought about ponyplay before, but now you've got me intrigued! You've inspired a multitude of ponyplay plot bunnies to start pawing at my feet, hoping to be picked up, cuddled and shown some attention!
You are an amazing writer, and it was nice to see Laurence again in another role. It suits him. Everything suits him when you're writing it.
*hugs tight*
Love Nila
ficchantress1218@gmail.com
AIM: Lucifers Ayngel (I promise I'm not a devil worshiper)
MSN: raven_temptress1218@hotmail.com
YIM: luiniltelcontar
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June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
updateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee this is LOVELY
please!
please!
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December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good story, can't wait for more. You might have a word with your beta though there were several places where
seemed to have been a word left out or a typo caused the wrong word to be used like bad for bag.
seemed to have been a word left out or a typo caused the wrong word to be used like bad for bag.
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July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story as it is written fantaticly with great grammar and no mistakes, my only problem is that I would like to read "The Cavallo and the Trainer" but you don't seem to have it on your profile anymore, could you pretty please put it back up?
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February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, this story deserves a review of its own too.
As with your other stories, the writing here is par excellence. It's not plagued with spelling errors, fragment sentences, or shifts in tense like many are. Again, you take the time to flesh the characters out and work the story around them instead of stuffing them into the story.
Now, we need to see DF's training continue. Please don't abandon this fic.
As with your other stories, the writing here is par excellence. It's not plagued with spelling errors, fragment sentences, or shifts in tense like many are. Again, you take the time to flesh the characters out and work the story around them instead of stuffing them into the story.
Now, we need to see DF's training continue. Please don't abandon this fic.