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May 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story. please continue
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May 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Do you have any plans to continue this story? Please do. It's a gripper. Excellent plot too, by the way.
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November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this fic. Please continue and update. It would be a shame to see it end here.
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June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW! this is a very interesting story. I am excited to see more of what will happen! Also you are doing great and you seemingly use spell check! I am so proud! A lot of writers don't take care of their stories, often they don't use spell check or try for good grammar. I'm glad I could understand your story without effort! I am very impressed. Keep it up!
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December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you thank you thank you for updating!!!!!!!! I am really curious as to what this family feud is about.
I love this line “You will know me Manon.” So romantic! He seems so protective of Manon, I would hate to see some guy try to harm her or imagine some guy trying to get her from himself? I think the Woodland man would destroy him! haha. I love your story!!!!!!!!!
I love this line “You will know me Manon.” So romantic! He seems so protective of Manon, I would hate to see some guy try to harm her or imagine some guy trying to get her from himself? I think the Woodland man would destroy him! haha. I love your story!!!!!!!!!
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November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Be still my heart...you have updated them both!!!! I am on cloud nine.
What is Dave planning on doing to Kagan.What is Kagan planning on doing with Manon!! Good stuff I know! (smile) GEt on with it.
What is Dave planning on doing to Kagan.What is Kagan planning on doing with Manon!! Good stuff I know! (smile) GEt on with it.
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November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I love your characters and the flow of it is extraordinary!. This is one of my ALWAYS BE CHECKING stories. You have made my MONTH! CONTINUE vibe
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November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My muse is back.
I absolutely salivate when I see your email. I am overjoyed with your story. I love your characters and how you develope them. I love that Manon is a different type of girl;though afraid sometimes, she will not always express it in the normal way showing some damage from her father. Kagan "sizzle" I love Andy and I hope his role widens. I love how all of this is coming together and I WANT MORE. your fan Viewerfinder
I absolutely salivate when I see your email. I am overjoyed with your story. I love your characters and how you develope them. I love that Manon is a different type of girl;though afraid sometimes, she will not always express it in the normal way showing some damage from her father. Kagan "sizzle" I love Andy and I hope his role widens. I love how all of this is coming together and I WANT MORE. your fan Viewerfinder
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April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! I finally found your story again. I couldn't remember where it was and my computer died and I lost all my bookmarks. It's an excellent story.
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April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like how unique this story is and I'm interested to find out more about the characters =)