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for Sanctuary

by Auska

person Kyllion
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your characters certainly are very interesting. I have to admit though, I do like reading about Vincent. He seems to be having the most strangest occurances with almost all of your created races. His dream certainly was an odd one. I can't wait to see what you'll do in the third chapter. If Danaeyl (spelt correctly? It's nice spelling of the name) will make another appearance. If Vincent will learn the spell to keep that Dream thing in one place. Hopefully, you'll explain in better detail what most of what happened in the second chapter will make sense. I look forward to it.
schedule February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You've created a set of very interesting characters. I can't wait to see how this plays out. Please do continue.