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I love your style; it differs from simple describtion in a way that makes it clear that the point of view is not that of a human being. I already like Gray a lot, please do continue as soon as your creativity strikes. XD

~jea

Oh, Moniquill - this story keeps getting better and better. You paint such vivid pictures with your words.

I felt like I could SEE the pixies and FEEL the flow of magical energy.

And, at least, I get the impression the court may be the villian of the peice.

However, this warm, happy moment is just exquisite!

Just found your story, very interesting start. I enjoyed the begining of the story where he was being chased and found by the mage. It's very lucky for him that the mage is being so nice to him. His thoughts on a soft bed would keep the elf more than a cage was a wonderful part; very insightful on your part. I'll be keeping an eye out for your story in the future. Keep up the good work, I hope you stay with it. Take care and thanks for sharing the story.

To trust or not to trust??

But as our little elf says - don't have any choices. So I'll just enjoy the ride.

(PS - wish I had someone to draw a sigil on my back and make it stop hurting. At least your lovely writing allows me to forget the pain for a while...)

I like it a lot. Keep 'em coming!

I really like this. Can't wait to see where you go from here.

Oh - you have such an amazing talent. And you tell such wonderful stories.

You've captured me totally.

I think I may have read this before - but one of the marvels of a 'mushy' mind is reading again and enjoying the story as much as the first time. (Of course - I may be totally mistaken...)

Looking forward to whatever happens next.

This is a really good start and has captured my interest. It's well written and seems to flow easily so far. I look forward to seeing where you take it.