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is it completed or is there more?

I love this. It's one of my favorite stories on this site. It's even inspired one of my own which isn't posted here yet. Are you going to continue with it or is this the end? There's so much potential. I'd love to see where it all goes. If he heals the garden, the relationship between him and Gray...it's all so perfect. Please update soon. Have you bookmarked.

I love your story! I also read the short story you wrote in this universe and I thought it was really well written. Well done and keep up the great work, I look forward to more!

Ok - Ok - I can see how the happy ending sets in. I still wish you'd finish the damn stories yourself. But I'm adjusting...

You might want to add that little PWP, though. Kinda proves Nydiel is seeking his own reasons to stay.

I am adding this story to 'Golden Nuggets (Original Slash List)', Rants/Journals section,
Only my personal favorites made the list:)
Thank you so much for writing!

On some level, I've come to expect such wonderful stories and writing from you - but I'm still amazed and gratified each time I read something new that you've written.

Admittedly, I'm an angst whore... The way you could weave such sadness into this exquisite scene astounds me. Absolutely wonderful!

PS - I know you don't reply to reviews. But do you read them at all? Do you care if we give them?

.....Just so you know. Seriously, this story is up there with some of the best fantasy books I've read. o_o

The one thing that was just a little bit jarring to me was...I think the line that Gray said about tasting elven seed. Before that line was fine, and then everything after was in keeping with the pace, but something about that line stood out in a distracting way.

I EAGERLY await updates. <3

What an intricut web you weave...

Nice to see the pixie people trust Gray so much. Hope they're right.

very nice chapters, I enjoyed the interaction between Nydiel and the grandmother. She is very wise it seems. Hopefully the elf will find his place and what makes him happy. Thanks for the update, please keep with the story. It's very enjoyable. Take care.

Hi, Moniquill,
I like this fic a lot, three good chapters. Your writing had improved since 'Cygen'(I want an update on that so badly, any chance of that?)The POV of an Elf is really done well, I appreciate stories, written from 'inside of a characters head', so to speak. You pull it off amazingly beleivable. That scene where Gray made Nydiel drink potions from his mouth was pretty hot:)

How old is Nydiel, is he 'completely' immortal or not? I read a lot of vampire fiction where the vamps are, of course, immortal. An Elf does not live off blood, though. Would be interesting to hear more about his magic.

Is the Magical Garden located inside of a huge greenhouse? Completely closed in? I understood that that estate is huge and has forest around it. That forest is not a part of a garden, or is it all connected?

Very good read, Moniquill, thank you:)