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February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello again,
great chapters! Even if it the story isn't the most innovative one (doesn't have to be) it's well written :-) And I can't wait for the next chapter after witnessing your talent with smut during the first five chapter!
Oh and I don't think it's needed to describe an outing. It's not that I don't want to read more from you but I don't think it will suit.
So, let the sex begin :D
Nathaniel
great chapters! Even if it the story isn't the most innovative one (doesn't have to be) it's well written :-) And I can't wait for the next chapter after witnessing your talent with smut during the first five chapter!
Oh and I don't think it's needed to describe an outing. It's not that I don't want to read more from you but I don't think it will suit.
So, let the sex begin :D
Nathaniel
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February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! ^_^ -happy dance- they're back together!! ^^ I wish it was a bit longer, but meh. oh well. great job!! Hope there is more!!
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February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nothing other then hurry up and update!!! ^_^
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February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
I'm following your story for quite a time now and I like it! So why didn't I review earlier? Hmmm... that's because... I'm a lazy fuck? Yeah, that will hit the point...
Anyway, the first five chapters I thought this story will be only a PWP (nothing wrong with that) and a really good one, too. I like it when partners takes turn and you just did that! *thumbs up*
When you announced putting in some story I was a little bit surprised, but it worked. I think you are doing really good, but please don't overuse angst. At the moment the dose is quite okay but... I just don't like it when characters are musing chapter after chapter over something a little talk would have solved. :-)
Oh and don't let Shawn jump Mike (he is interested, isn't he?!) because if Shawn really likes Jay he would not just jump another guy when having a serious argument with his lover. If he does that I will personally look for him and pounce some sense into Shawn! ;-D
So far, keep the fast updates, they are more than appreciated,
Nathaniel
I'm following your story for quite a time now and I like it! So why didn't I review earlier? Hmmm... that's because... I'm a lazy fuck? Yeah, that will hit the point...
Anyway, the first five chapters I thought this story will be only a PWP (nothing wrong with that) and a really good one, too. I like it when partners takes turn and you just did that! *thumbs up*
When you announced putting in some story I was a little bit surprised, but it worked. I think you are doing really good, but please don't overuse angst. At the moment the dose is quite okay but... I just don't like it when characters are musing chapter after chapter over something a little talk would have solved. :-)
Oh and don't let Shawn jump Mike (he is interested, isn't he?!) because if Shawn really likes Jay he would not just jump another guy when having a serious argument with his lover. If he does that I will personally look for him and pounce some sense into Shawn! ;-D
So far, keep the fast updates, they are more than appreciated,
Nathaniel
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February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank goodness!! Sort of XD lol. I feel how bad with how everything just go so screwed up. Poor guys :__( Cna't wait for the next chapter!! Your quick. I love it!!! hehe
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February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
coooooool what ,,, what HAPPEND NEXT???????
update soooooon
update soooooon
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February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww! Hurry up and update!!! They can't hate each other!!!! (Espiaclly now with all that awesome behind them XD)
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February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg, lol I really hope you continue this. I had to take a shower after this one lmfao. Okay, please continue I love it. And I greatly appreciate the wishes you gave to my family, I'm sure my father will be well soon. ^^
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February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww man. all the smut is great!!! Love it!!!
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February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! What a place to stop XD lol. Can't wait till the next update!!!