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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
I'm somewhat glad you continued though I was sceptic some times before if this will really work. I think it will :-)
Jay surely is a nasty boy - but I think Shawn will forgive him every time he plays his wicked games ;-) Oh and what about some ShawnxJay action - it was really hot the first time (except the talk afterwards...) and I think there should be more in your story :-)
Greetings and let it flow
Nathaniel
I'm somewhat glad you continued though I was sceptic some times before if this will really work. I think it will :-)
Jay surely is a nasty boy - but I think Shawn will forgive him every time he plays his wicked games ;-) Oh and what about some ShawnxJay action - it was really hot the first time (except the talk afterwards...) and I think there should be more in your story :-)
Greetings and let it flow
Nathaniel
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February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
... D: Aww.. c'mon.. poor babies.. why was it bad for him to say "I love you"? Aaaaw! They just had fucking great sex, and then.. boom.. it all went in a flash.
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February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LMAO. Omg, I feel so baaad..
lmfao, that happened to me once. XD My mom called and when I picked up, I was expecting my friend to be there cause she said she was gonna call right back, and I was like "Yo did you see what he did?! That shit was crazy!" Cause we were watching a movie, calling during commercials, and my mom was like "HEY! Why are you cursing?!" And I felt dumb as shit. XD
lmfao, that happened to me once. XD My mom called and when I picked up, I was expecting my friend to be there cause she said she was gonna call right back, and I was like "Yo did you see what he did?! That shit was crazy!" Cause we were watching a movie, calling during commercials, and my mom was like "HEY! Why are you cursing?!" And I felt dumb as shit. XD
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February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O_O OMG! NO! Jay! Jaaay! Poor guy! Omgomgomomogmgomgomg *cant review cause wants to know what happens next!*
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February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG YAY! YAYAYAY! osdmfklasjfhaklsdnf
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February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS SO HOT, I NEARLY WET MY PANTS. D:
God, I loved that scene! XD When Jay was rough with Shawn. Jeez, guys fucking eachother is so hot. ._. Damnit! That was such a great ending, but I didn't want it to end! XD They got all horny again and you cut it off! SEQUAL, I SAY! RAHRAHRAJG
God, I loved that scene! XD When Jay was rough with Shawn. Jeez, guys fucking eachother is so hot. ._. Damnit! That was such a great ending, but I didn't want it to end! XD They got all horny again and you cut it off! SEQUAL, I SAY! RAHRAHRAJG
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February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OwO AOJSDKSJFASDF!!! This is sooo hawt, I love how Jay was all pulling Shawns hair.. maybe I'm just oddly kinky, but I loooooved it. X33333
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February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! Aww, poor Shawn! Totally deprived. XDDD That was hot. *o*
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February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God, that was so unbelievably hot, just sitting here and reading it! D: Jesuuus. XD Hehehe~! *squeal*
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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello there,
another wonderful chapter. You promised right, the angst was bearable - okay, it was nice and the right amount :-)
If you should continue... I thought you were just going to write a simple coming out story and I wasn't too fond of that idea - but now that I know you're going to try to go down the the road of religious intolerance against homosexuality, I don't know. Will it fits in the story? Puh... No idea, really. So if you feel like it, I will read and tell you, what I think. If not, I'm content with the story as it is :-)
Greetings
Nathaniel
another wonderful chapter. You promised right, the angst was bearable - okay, it was nice and the right amount :-)
If you should continue... I thought you were just going to write a simple coming out story and I wasn't too fond of that idea - but now that I know you're going to try to go down the the road of religious intolerance against homosexuality, I don't know. Will it fits in the story? Puh... No idea, really. So if you feel like it, I will read and tell you, what I think. If not, I'm content with the story as it is :-)
Greetings
Nathaniel