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for The Shower

by Kawanee

person Marla
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG. YOU ReALLY NEED TO UPDATE THIS ASAP.
I'VE WAITED LIKE 3 MONTHS... MUAHAHA.
ok end caps.
seriously. this was great. dont stop.
:D
person Laaerie
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay!!! sex sex kinky sex! I liked it!!! who wouldn't???!!!!! gives us more!!!! sorry... brain death... comments might sound idiotic for awhile :D

Laaerie
person Natha
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello!

A sex-cliffhanger?! Hope Shawn relaxes till the next chapter :D

It was/is hot anyway. But is there any chance of some action with Shawn being on top? For me that scene in a previous chapter was definetly one of the sexiest if not the sexiest scene I've read in that story (though you are really good at writing smut and the other scenes were hot as well)!

Greetings and keep writing
Nathaniel
person Laaerie
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought I had reviewed this before.. but apparently I had not, and I've been enjoying this story so much that now I feel guilty! so... review----> NU-OH!!!! YOU MAY NOT STOP THERE!!!!! NO!!!! *pouts and sucks in breath* go back and add the rest of the er... *coughs* love making (I wanted to put another word there :D) gimme... the FULL... game!!!! *cries and slams head to computer* please?!!!!

:D Laaerie
P.S I wrote this in a moment of insomnia and it probably makes no sense!
person Udyjay
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't help it, I love sugar! ):


SDKLFJASDLFKJSDLFK. LMFAO. Ohhhhhh myyyy goood, Jay IS the devil! XD Ohmygod, that was highLARIOUS. I can't believe he did that... if that ever happened to me, I'd.. I dunno what I'd do, but jebus. XD

;A; His mom is horrible! God, poor Shawn, I wonder how SHE'LL take it when she finds out that HE'S gay. She'll get all these retarded ideas about her being with Mike, she probably won't realize he even has a boyfriend! xD
person Udyjay
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pffft, stupid homophobic fuckers. D: They get me mad. >.<
person Udyjay
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
There you go again, ending it at the worst times! UPDATE, they were getting all kinky and stuuuuufffffffff!! *jumps around* SPLEE!!! <333
person VRon8899
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehehe. Jay is so evil. ^^ I'm soooo happy you updated!! keep it up!! I luv this story so much ^_^;
person VRon8899
schedule March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
-pouts- I wish ur chapters were longer!! But I love the updates!!! ^^ Keep writing!!! ^^
person VRon8899
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whew...O_O...nice and hot!! I can't wait for more!!! ^_^ I love your style!!!!