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by lonlydragonbrde

schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I only joined this site today and have just finished reading your story. Very well done, your description had me there in person. I enjoyed the subject matter and hope to read more as you hopefully will have more chapters to write.

Cheers

Click.
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah! This story is so good! I remember reading it awhile ago and then lost track of it. But I'm glad its back! I kind of love Seth and Cassie together. I like that Cassie still has a bit of her attitude because it makes things just a little more difficult for Seth. Is seth really in love with her or just obsessed/power-tripping?? Hmmm...UPDATE SOON so I can find out!!

schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now that is a slave story...Not the stuff about oh how they are used for just sex...no this is good...This is true.
I loved it...Please! Continue to write on this. I would love to see is Cassie is broken...
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is such a great fic so far. Seth is such a jerk. Will we be getting more info on the relationship between cassie and seth?? Does he really love her or is just evil?? Lol...POST MORE SOON!!

~Sonya
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ya need to update
person sexysecrets
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is an awsome story please put the next chpater on soon this is so good. I can't wait to read the next chapter. I like the torture scene very nice. Keep writing
person Kanashii
schedule January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really nice story! (or rather, really arousing story). You and I write very much of the same topics and it is very nice to see someone else write the kinds of things I do. I hope to see lots more from you, you have a lot of talent! :) Check out "The Comare" and "Betrayal" on my list, they follow the same type of story you wrote. Nice to meet someone else who is a kindred spirit in what we enjoy writing about!
Warmly,
Kanashii
schedule January 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Looks like a good story, but if you could break up the text a bit it would be so much easier to read.

Example "ladeda," he said

"hmmm" she said

dddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd

Thanks so much!

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