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for Eternity In a Moment

by Aya

schedule November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Heehee~ Interesting. I'd love to see how Lucifer intends to discipline Affar and if he'll ever get to spend more time with Jaiya? Hm... Really interesting.
schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh - delightful. We have 'discipline' to look forward to...
schedule January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More and more fascinating as it goes. Love the way the story is unfolding.
schedule January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is a nice story~ X3 I always enjoy stories that involve the angels, it's so interesting to see how people use them and how they picture them.

Raphael makes me particularly happy. (Even though I'm not nice to her/him (Always personally saw him as a boy) in my own story. XDDD)

Keep up the good work, this looks extremely promising.
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What an intriguing style and story.

I like the way you show John's (?) confusion. And slowly reveal what's happening.

The 'common' images appear with each name and description - but I have the feeling they are so different from what they originally seem.

Hope to read further clarification soon.