rate_review Reviews

For what its worth i like it so far...i would like to finish reading it but a very good start...cant wait to read the rest of it...thanks

Aaaahhhh! I'm going nuts with this. Posting on this site is a completely new concept for me, and as I read the story, I keep finding typos and grammatical errors. Since I am aware of most of these mechanical mistakes, please bear with me. I would definitely appreciate your comments on the creative aspects of the story though. Thanks again!